Ok, no one has actually done what Uncle_Raj said. So to not make him a liar. Welcome, read all the rules and guides in the newbie camp, have fun...
i totally agree, see a chain letter, open, delete. They should be happy i had enough decency to open the letter.
Totally agree, one liners can ruin a poem but you used them well, it wasn't fantastic, but it was an improvement from last time. Good job.
You don't post much here derek but i must say you are very good, i really like it, i want to see more. (w00t)
I must agree, it is so short yet i really love this, shows the work of an amazing writer, keep it up ;)
Sounds pretty good for a song, don't know what it sounds like perforemed, probly better than the way i read it in my head, like to hear a demo of...
CHEAP RIP OFF ALEART LOL, joking, really great, i liked it, had a really good flow and none of the rhyming felt forced, great poem. ;) Keep it up.
First of all you called it a song, this SOUND does not deserve to be called a song. It is always on TV and it really pisses me off. As far as i...
I'm AMD all the way ;)
Nickelback - How you remind me. Love the song, never get sick of it. ;)
I got PWN3D, he got mine in 20, though he had to ask the king guy twice. Mine was a lamp. ;) he said desk lamp and in reality i was thinking of...
Yes. [/b] Yes, it may not take up space but they are using up names that other people may want to have.
The first one is a bit out of proportion, as you said but other than that it's great, the second one is spot on ;) Good job.
have you been on a writting spree, you have seem to have written so many, so quickly, meh, anyway another great piece of work. I really liked it. ;)
Both Rhinestone by Xero and the forgotten demo say "In a minute you'll find me" before the sratching sine they have the exact same lyrics. So...
Another fantastic piece of work, nothing else to say, it's just amazing, keep it up. B)
pretty good, This rhyme felt a bit forced to me, even if it wasn't but that is the only thing i didn't like about it, overall great job, can't...
i agree, i liked it, the way it was written it made me feel like i was wandering through the poem, it was a wierd feeling. Great work.
I really like it, another great piece of work, i must agree with fallenangel that is my favourite part to. Can't wait to see what you do to it...
O.K, i'm trying to convert some DVD's to DivX on my computer, i've tried heaps of programs, can't rember the name of most of them but they all...