thanks marj...<3 thanks graffitied... :)
Jesus! it's fantastic!
a bit cliche, nice setting for the poem and a good job in the use of words.
Shadow. Tearing the flesh wide open from the core of his wound, Unstrung guitars now weep a deadly tune, Before a black background he wails...
it's fantastic! i loved everything about it! very touching and heart breaking. i love you for this piece of poetry mate.
much thanks anya.
thanks for the pretty flattering reply, girl.
good thing...
neat. hilarious at some points.
great work. it was truly amazing!
it was great...i love the way you rhyme mate!
i loved the theme, the whole motive about you drawing yourself in a story and telling the reader about your story in the poem. good job!
it was presented in a good flow, but the whole theme didn't appeal to me. i liked the last stanza. something very different in it, i stood out.
it was nice....but frankly, too mushy for me to digest... but a good job!
thanks mate
my uncle passed away today. poor poor soul. may he rest in peace.
i have finally posted a poem in a very long time and this piece of work is different from the others...it needs your comments to quench it's...
very original!
rest in peace great wrestler.... this is heart breaking
how, how how? it's ...so....FUCKED UP!