well:... "Paradise, as I had reckoned it to be" "Born into my Mind's Realm" a short story about a slave. many more....you've got to make your...
thanks mate.
i disagree.. the more time you reflect on something.. the more you dwell on a certain context.. will affect how close you become to a piece you...
thanks for the comments. Tremulant- i don't like to spend much time on my poems. i let it flow out as fast as possible so that the emotion...
great great job! ;)
it short and good ;)
brunette baggy or skimpy?
much thanks David mate. ;)
snoop date or mate?
doo me or you?
Martyr. She shuts her eyes, and a hopeless tear falls from her cheek upon your face, She has cherished every second, every odd moment in the...
Aweome lines! ;)
Deep, Dark, Depressive...*adds a G word*...... Ga *adds another G word*..... Ga *adds another G word*..... GREAT!
:o it's fantastic! great job! ;)
I think it was aimed at you. :P [/b] WTF?...*kills you* I would really appreciate it if i could get comments on my poems.... aaah, that sure...
i wonder if they could make it more comfortable for video gaming whores instead of more smooth and compact and good looking. i don't think the...
Don't blame yourself for what you are becoming. A person once said, "You are what you are made to be" and it's darn right true, so don't go...
The Mind’s Realm. It may slither as your shadow, while you walk alone at night, It may grab you in the day, while you’re at home covered in...
Good poem, but you should find yourself another thread, mate. Much thanks heshboy ;)
and now i announce that i'm not allergic to cyber hugs :lol: ... c'mon patrons, readers...you can do better than just one reply..? :(