But i'm sick of this world... :angry: Dying to be a teen. I’m so tired of people telling me how different I am, Though I try to merge in,...
Great work...seriously... ;)
feel the same, it could have ended better. but great job none the less... ^_^
good job, but until toward the end of the poem i could only guess what was going on. try to be a little more specific, but if this your style then...
Thanks guys... ^_^
very catchy, true. i think i will label this as your best...i loved it. ^_^
i could sware this is some modern shakespear work, but i won't, because it isn't complete. though your choice of words is great, the repitition of...
good work there. a nice sweet piece... ;)
i liked the first one better... .good...coughcoughfunnycough....job :lol:
Looooooong time. really missed your work. amazing as always, bro... ;)
Thanks Ether ^_^
Migrating poets. A tremor and a wish, when will it lead me to my death? With a burden on shoulder and dream in hand, it all seems hard to...
just an additional stanza right? good job ;)
really? i thought it sucked. i don't think my writer's block is over yet. thanks a lot guys! ^_^
it's a great concept..i liked the whole restaurant part...lol.. great flow and good job! ^_^
Wall. These walls they fall upon my dreams, waking me up to reality, These humbled golden threads unwoven and undone for me to see, What goes up...
yeh, sure i will be honoured....i won't be good enough, but i'll try my best. thanks a lot. ^_^
it's just amazing, beautiful....great job...and sorry about your loss. 9.9/10 ^_^ sorry about your uncle, again.
I absolutely loved the second stanza! ^_^
I WANT POEM RECITED!!! :lol: