thanks torn rose... ^_^
Sacrifices in the silence. There are these familiar phases of sudden silence, That grab me tight when I’m around you, An alerting emotion, a...
impressive for a short poem...but i'm damned sure you can do much better than this. you are an amazing poet. ^_^
i really like the poem...many lines were just amazing..some other were a wee bit disappointing...but for a first try...*thumb up* ^_^
i really like it....8.6/10 ^_^
7.4/10...nice ^_^
^_^ 7.8/10....nice job
it's nice...7/10 ^_^
thanks people ^_^
thanks ^_^
i love your songs about "nothing"... whatever it is..i know i liked it! ^_^
lol, thanks ^_^
Rocker your comments please... ^_^ and those are his eyebrows not his eyes, if you aren't sure.... ^_^
^_^ awesome job!
thanks guys ^_^
a 7.3/10...some lines are amzing, mesmerizing...but some others pull it down
i like the first and the second stanza...sounds something like green day (politically) and a bit of social and political Coldplay. a little...
rappish....very rappish...perhaps it's the rhyming that makes me feel that way, but the flow may just come in if you actually make a song of it....
Your birthday, eh? Well, I'll make notice of it so we all celebrate. [/b] was that just you being nice, or a hint? :mellow: