i like the choice of words....the flow's ok. cool job... ^_^
it's a lovely thing...a lovely creation. damn deep and damn moving. it's got an amazing flow. beautiful rhyme pattern. great job! ^_^
i'm finally in the school soccer tem!.... this is the first time our school's got soccer...lame ass school!
thanks David... ^_^
thanks torn rose! ;)
test I’m asleep every night in the hollowness of every mistake, I’m tied to every moment staring, back into every blank space, I’m awake to...
dude...i'm so sorry for all that. but the last point seemed to have disturbed me the most. listen, i have a twin sister, so we never hide anything...
it's cool
i'm sorry ....but it's just plastic...it's a prop at a halloween vampire store, but if it really disturbs you inspite of all that, please PM...
thanks a lot guys. it feels great to recieve such reviews. ^_^
Absolutely.....my mom narrated the whole thing to me once...about seeing God and all that. i thought it was pretty neat...
Arsenal kicked Arse!!! (w00t) did chelsea win?
do i get candy for guessin right and appreciating? :mellow:
i wanna to save someone from death, so that the person will feel how i have felt all this time... i wouldn't mind dying while' i'm at it...
Arsenal!!!! Rooney or Van persie?
lol, yeh that line is dead freaky.... i think you refer to the POPE...i had him in my head when i read th poem. good job! ^_^
i love the second stanza....something fantastic about it.... ^_^
Guillotine. Deaf to the loud voices that call out from behind, I walk on this long winding road, lost in my mind, Where do these entwining...
the sun comes closer to the earth every year. there will be a time when it will be right over head and we shall all be soaked in our sweat. there...
i believe in God and have faith.... ^_^ sometimes people are disappointed by the pain the God inflicts upon us, but my religion has explained...