amazing...first i thought this thread was poetry, but it wasn't, lol great job!
thanks david.... the thing is dude, i wanted people to know that keeping things within yourself can hurt a lot, and letting it out may be very...
i'll see about that...thanks ^_^
The Needles concealed within these Scars. Tender love causes this fragrant sin, Holding on, though it’s lost within, Remembering the times gets...
yeeesh...i replied to part two first...damn...i like it, but part two sounds more matured.... ^_^
it's fantastic.....nearly flawless...i love your writing skills, it reminds me of a lot of Applegate or Christopher Pike....mind blowing job! it's...
i should say, the very few exquisite words make the poem very very strong though it is not all that long...lenght dosen't matter for poets like...
i like the last line ^_^ ...i really do ^_^ ....and,yeh, your view point is the same as everyone else's....everyone feels the "bitter not sweet"...
fabulous, i was completely engrossed.... ^_^
man, thanks a lot fallen angel and torn rose!!!...you guys rock yourselves!!
The memory trickling down my mind like drops of the acid rain, It feeds upon the sanity I have left; it devours the pleasure in my brain, Crystal...
it's amazing...your choice of words can't get any better...wonderful job! :o
thanks a ton guys! ^_^
Curtains of Life. I can feel the numbness flowing right into my skull, Through my brain, I’m blurred, I feel so dull, Holding on to the failing...
thanks a lot! ^_^
it's okay... ^_^
The voice before I die. While the frigid moment grabs me naked, I realize now, how miserably I faked it, It catches me, and stares me in the...
frankly, the flow wasn't all that good, but some words that you've chosen and placed make it a good few parts.... some modification could take it...
thanks a ton fallenangel and david!!! ^_^
Come my Way. Drowning in the scent of a misfit vision, Holding on to death’s calm sensation, Blooming into tomorrow, like yesterday, Waiting...