it..it's...it's beautiful...BEAUTIFUL! ^_^
one word- or make that two- nervous lust.... :mellow: interesting... :lol:
^_^ i like it....but i love the way it ended! :lol:
very punk...extreme punk rock...i can hear the heavy guitars in my ears as i read this!!!COOL!!!...make it a song, and it'll stick on to the World...
frankly..it's very flat, but i love the way you've been very diplomatic and given equal power to the view points of the three categories of people...
i loved the second stanza...the theme of the poem flowed very well, but you could use extremely selective and vague words to give your poem some...
thanks a lot people... ^_^ marj...why are you sad? :mellow: take care girl...i'll mail ya ^_^
aww...thanks a lot people!!! ^_^ thanks Dave and Marj. ^_^ you guys are hillarious!
Thanks a lot fallenangel! ^_^
awww....thanks fallenangel! ^_^
The Heavens steal my Love. Closer to my touch, far from my mind, I finally stare into the memories that I had left behind, Here you were, and...
Thanks a lot Adam ^_^ ...never seen you around The Writer's Cove...any works of yours?
A Beast who loved You. I’m mistaken to be your dread, so cold, My life has been a nightmare, I should have told. Don’t run away yet, feel me...
OMG!...gee...thanks a lot guys...this felt really great. thanks a lot for all those comments! you guys rock! ^_^ thanks again!
Cold Dread A feeling so frozen, it bites every thought, It keeps reminding me of all the times we’ve fought, When I’m alone and thinking, I’m...
i love the rhyme and the way you got off with the message simultaneously...it takes a lot of patience to bring it up... ^_^ a concluding stanza...
Very well written!...(as usual) but this...there was something missing yet something more .... perhaps the flow wasn't all that satisfying, but...