not good, yet i post it.... ^_^ Serving you. Graciously, I give away, moment by moment, Attending to the lost souls about me, I can’t seem to...
short but extremely gripping, amazing how you can say so much in so little...very well done!
it's got a whole country's voice to it, what could bet better?! :o great job there!
thanks hellfame... ^_^ thanks Marj, it's very sweet of you to reply...<3 ^_^
thanks a lot people. i hate it because it was really hard for me to stick to the topic, and i couldn't flow well...i usually write what's random...
My Silent Contradiction. Isn’t it just easy to let me do what you say? You’d feel the same, if I had it my way. I can’t agree yet I’m forced to...
Thanks Marj! <3 ^_^
thanks guys... *poem under reconstruction* ^_^
^_^ nice...
thanks a lot people, i'll work on it as said!...thanks guys! ^_^
Crouching Figure A crouching figure, at the end of the room, Flooded in blue light, it reminds me of its doom. A posture uncomfortable, a mind...
thanks a lot!!... a very lot... well today, at school, i was hit by this amazing title called "Vessel of Blood"...i'm gonna work on it real hard...
thanks a lot guys... a very special thanks to lpsk8er... ^_^
Stranger Beside. Can you feel that somebody beside you all the while? It’s there amongst the crowd, much closer than a mile. And at every...
thanks a whole lot for your comments people... a very special thanks to fallenangel (Jenny) and David, who make it a point to comment on my...
i need your comments on this one please! ^_^ Time. A moment of peace, and it slips away, A moment of grace that I give today. A moment that...
real intense...very very deep..i've felt like that but never hurt myself...great work! ^_^
*applause* that is absolutely fantastic! a master-piece! it was very intense yet i could feel the song sail in my mind...that was a hell of a...
^_^ jenny...okie... thanks lpsk8er... ^_^
great piece...i love the "verse"... especially the "cold hand" part...cold love, eh? great stanza there and a good piece of writing! ^_^