Thanks. i sort of felt lost when writing because i couldn't express want i really wanted to and in the end the poem wasn't what i first intended....
gee...thanks a lot David!! you rock well too!! i just read your poem...it was completely mind blowing!!!!! ^_^
i abosuloutely love this part...if you don't call this your best...i call it my best...AMAZING!!! ^_^
another one all my fellow poetic friends! and your comments too please! Poets feel pain. Stretching pain killing my inside, It reaches out...
thanks so much guys! you are great! i'll be writing more soon! thanks sooooo much!!! ^_^
lol David...i can understand if a lot of people didn't get what "classic mile" actually meant. so here i'm gonna clear the doubt. a classic mile...
i need your comments on this one too, please! ^_^ Pride, Beauty, Love and Revenge. Is the ocean wild enough to humble my pride? I’m worthy...
the guy must've been a killer... very painful and brilliant...good job! ^_^
7.5/10...NICE!!! i really like that part too! it just held me there and made me read it again and again and again...that was beautiful! *thumbs...
thanks lpsk8er! ^_^
thanks a lot fallenangel! you rule as well! ^_^ and lpsk8er, temme, temme, what it reminds you of, please! i'd really like to know if it relates...
Haunting memories. And the picture stares at me. It’s been frozen in for long, My vision inside reminding me, Of al those things that went wrong....
thanks fallenangel, that is one of my favourite lines too! and torn rose, you are mind blowing...too good to describe, you should take more...
:o mind blowing..the darn amazing poem got me thinking about the state of mind of the person who has actually been through so many miserable...
Wanna live free. There’s a classic mile left conquered, And another abandoned one to go, I have more to give forever, When I die, a dozen more to...
involves metal....a lot and lot of screaming... thanks guys....this wasn't my best though. the flow wasn't good enough, it was very very random....
I’m You. Don’t protest to this feeling, This feeling that has held you closed, Submit to that hiding face, Accept defeat that it proposed....
short and rich!...way to go!
thanks guys!! (w00t) ...i'd really also like to know if something is wrong...and negative points??
thanks so much...it was very random though... ^_^ PS-Writer's Cove is growing rapidly...KEEP IT UP!!! (w00t)