nice I like it!
thanks...I really appreciate the comment and for taking the time to read it!
nice... my favorite line is" your eyes are clouded with your ignorance". There were other ones in there that were pretty good to.
sweet that was great!
Immortal Touch Loves skin paper-thin like porcelain deep rising eyes draped in a sadness An immortal touch a caress through a dream...
I redid this one [IMG]
It was inspired by a poem I wrote.
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well written...I enjoyed it! You could leave it like that or add more either way I think it's good.
A Soldier's Dream seeing the unseen following footsteps screaming silent screams while whispering under a tree position yourself...
Pure resiliency As uncertain in The company we keep Idle visits Who no longer care Deliberate Defiant Riddles to fathom Purple dreamscapes...
That was pretty cool!
Waiting in the night silently watching with a calm steady stare as I am so far gone bring me back if you can although reality I find...
Time Restless I wander In the deep of night Attempting to find What you left behind Speculating the difference Of what it all...
[IMG] Let me know what you think
Rainbows hide behind a place for you to find I know I’ll find you somewhere over the rainbow inside your eyes where therein lies faraway...