Here is anther one, probly my last one for a few weeks since I have exams comming up. Hope you all enjoy it. A Creature of Hate So many blurs, That are suppose to be my friends, So many people, But I can’t seem to see them, Why did u back stab me? Time and time again, Cause it let the darkness, To slowly creep in. Now the darkness, Has clouded my mind. All your hate towards me, Has cause me to become blind, My skin is now marble, And it holds inside, A soul that was once free, But my distrust forced it inside. Why did you do this? When I gave you all my trust, How could you do this? Just let my soul rust, As I sit here all alone, I can’t stand it anymore, What happened to al the people? That I once adored. Now I feel the bitter cold, Of the my loneliness inside, And I try so hard to break free, But my spirit has seemed to have died, But there is one last emotion, That can set me free from this hell, But do I dare call upon it, For I could loose control of myself. But I’m fed up with being all alone, Don’t want to be a creature of your hate, So I will let my need for revenge, Use my body to seel your fate, I will break free from this prison, Let leash the emotions dormant inside, Take you down with me, Cause I can not bring myself to live this life, So now how do you feel, To be so close to death, I know the feeling, Cause I’m already dead, Look in my eyes, See what you have made, Look at the person you once knew, As I watch your life fade.
Your writing's just awesome. I really feel identified with your poems. remember: if anything gets published, i'll receive a free copy lol you promised. i'm sure you'll go far. way to go!!