I finally finished a colossal poem I have been working on for a while, moving through my main emotional phases between when I started to write poetry again and now. It is formated, so I'll have to send it through a link to my website though. If anyone makes it through the whole things, please comment! http://esaul17.sitesled.com/Poems/A Journey Through Time.html
It was...hella long...I mean...sure you said so yourself...but still I got lost on some parts and had to reread them...and the little dialogue inbetween confused me a little at times 'cause I had the feeling that the person 'you' were talking to wasn't really for or against you...like...he kept putting you down sometimes...and on some parts he'd agree.... that's the way I saw it but still...I really enjoyed most of it... She’s still here You’re dying So? Your future… Gone I liked this part most of all...really got me going...and I can't get it out of my mind...hope you don't mind if I use something similar soon?