A Love Once Lost

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    Friskey™

    Friskey™ LPA Super Member LPA Addict

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    I just wrote this 10 minutes ago and decided to let you all look at it. This is another one of my "first in awhile" written songs, so...this is basically my breakup letter w/ Angie.

    A Love Once Lost

    And I’m saying
    I can’t lie to you anymore
    And I hate to say
    That I don’t love you like I used to
    It’s over now
    I have to go on with my own life
    And forgive me
    For doing this to you

    I moved on too soon
    I can finally say that I’m happy without you
    And we’re through
    I hope that you are happy without me too
    I have to say goodbye

    To my love once lost
    The memories
    They will stay
    They’re not painful
    My love once lost
    And I love you
    But not like I used to

    The dreams are telling me
    I know it’s a sign of telling
    We’re not meant to be
    The scorpion’s not lying
    We gave it our best
    To do what we do
    But when you’re held up like this
    There’s nothing I can do
    But I’m over you now
    I’m over you now
     
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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    -points to quoted part- I loved that bit. Not to mean that I didn't love the whole thing, I think this is a really good piece of work, the first verse was my favourite, though. This is a beautiful piece of work and I expect you to carry on writing the goods. -stern face-
    Cheers
    P.S. And even though I don't know who Angie is, I'd guess that she didn't take it too well even though it's a really nice letter...
     

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