LOL. GREAT TWIST W/ OMAR'S STORY!! LOL. I was laughing my ######' ASS off when I read that. GO DEREK!!!
Season 2: Coming This Month... If I could change I would, take back the pain I would, retrace every wrong move that I made..
Alright shows how much I know. I thought chapter 6 was an amazing comeback and great because of its metaphors, yet I've gotten no "WOW" comments on it yet. Sorry I disapointed this time around, I hope you guys don't think the next chapter will suck.
Alright shows how much I know. I thought chapter 6 was an amazing comeback and great because of its metaphors, yet I've gotten no "WOW" comments on it yet. Sorry I disapointed this time around, I hope you guys don't think the next chapter will suck. [/b][/quote] WOW, Derek, WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I never said Chapter 6 sucked, its just that it wasn't as exciting as the other chapters, but it was good, nonetheless. I still love this story!
WOW, Derek, WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I never said Chapter 6 sucked, its just that it wasn't as exciting as the other chapters, but it was good, nonetheless. I still love this story! [/b][/quote] So you're a fan of the shoot first, ask questions later side of our character eh? (Who's name you won't find out for a LONG time ) Well don't worry..as you can see by the end of chapter 6, Number 7 will have a lot of action. Glass flying, sparks flying off the metal bar tables from the bullets...oh it's gonna be great. AT LEAST I'M GOING TO TRY TO MAKE IT GREAT! Gimme some time to play some action games the next few days so I can get in the whole 'ass-kicking' frame of mind, if you know what I mean. *Does a kungfu pose* WOOHA.
So you're a fan of the shoot first, ask questions later side of our character eh? (Who's name you won't find out for a LONG time ) Well don't worry..as you can see by the end of chapter 6, Number 7 will have a lot of action. Glass flying, sparks flying off the metal bar tables from the bullets...oh it's gonna be great. AT LEAST I'M GOING TO TRY TO MAKE IT GREAT! Gimme some time to play some action games the next few days so I can get in the whole 'ass-kicking' frame of mind, if you know what I mean. *Does a kungfu pose* WOOHA. [/b][/quote] LOL, yeah, sure, I'll wait. But you better not disappoint me . . .
I finally got around to reading chapters 1 through 6. long read. that was great, i highly anticipating the next few chapters! keep it up!
Wow. Just so you guys know I haven't forgotten about this story. I'm just finding myself unable to get around to typing a few paragraphs of another chapter. Also I've really been thinking lately of just going over this whole story and strengthening it..because its a good story but it has its weak spots, especially in the area of dialouge, so who knows what I'll do if I re-write the chapters. I probably wont have enough time to do that though. Chapter 7 will be coming within the next two weeks.
Bleeding hell Derek...where do you get all this inspiration boy-o?! This...has to be the best thing I have read ever (Yes...it even beats some of Teef's work...) I'm a very hard person to please-novel-wise, but this has hit me like a rock. You've done a really good job with it. I hope you can find the time to carry this thing on, its really got me gripped..
Here you go Kat.... Chapter 7 finally posted. I got a burst of inspiration. I think this is the most revealing chapter to date so I hope you all like it a lot. I need your approval to continue this story on. It's like fuel to my thoughts. Remember all new chapters will be posted in the first post and the current chapter will appear in the thread description.
That was awesome, I like how you kept him going because if he had killed himself, it would've killed a potentially awesome ending.
Yeah I had that planned for quite some time now. Thanks for the awesome comments guys. Everyone seems to be hooked now.
What an awesome chapter!! Well worth the wait!! This was probably one of the best chapters in the entire series. Keep it going, my man.