Again (Original)

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    Cal

    Cal LPA Super Member LPA Super Member

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    This song is the original version of the song, i just finished writing it, i think this is my best song ever, i wanna hear your comments on it, please be VERY HONEST, i wont mind if u say its "f**kin s**t", cuz i want to learn from it and make myself better, thanks

    Again

    [Verse 1]
    Ive broken down again, because of you
    Ive taken my last breath, because of you
    And now i want to leave it all behind
    So take me away me away, away from you

    [Chorus]
    Why do i have to feel this way, Its all your fault
    Who ever told me the sun dosnt shine my way
    I feel like ive been punished for nothing, its all your fault
    I cant take it anymore, Its taking over me

    [Verse 2]
    I cannot face the day, anymore
    I think im about to cry, again
    Forver this has taken to set itself free
    Set me free, free from all this worry

    [Chorus]
    Why do i have to feel this way, Its all your fault
    Who ever told me the sun dosnt shine my way
    I feel like ive been punished for nothing, its all your fault
    I cant take it anymore, Its taking over me

    [Verse 3]
    I feel as if im on my own, forever
    Spinning forever in your mind, together
    Why does it take so long, to close down
    What is making me feel, like im broken, again

    [Chorus]
    Why do i have to feel this way, Its all your fault
    Who ever told me the sun dosnt shine my way
    I feel like ive been punished for nothing, its all your fault
    I cant take it anymore, Its taking over me

    [Bridge]
    I feel dissapoint about everything ive done
    Taking another bruise for the battles i failed to complete
    This pain is another scar for me to live with
    i cannot take it anymore, anymore

    [Chorus]
    Why do i have to feel this way, Its all your fault
    Who ever told me the sun dosnt shine my way
    I feel like ive been punished for nothing, its all your fault
    I cant take it anymore, Its taking over me
    Why do i have to feel this way, Its all your fault
    Who ever told me the sun dosnt shine my way
    I feel like ive been punished for nothing, its all your fault
    I cant take it anymore, Its taking over me
     
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    Jamie

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    That is great
     
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    Dedicated

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    That's awesome! :eek:
     
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    Cal

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    thanks for ur comments guys, appreciated alot :)
     

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