Like before, verses one, two, three and the pre chorus are all rapidly sung, and the solo and the choruses are sung at an even pace. Personally, I like my previous song better, but something new wouldn't hurt. ------------- (Verse One) I can’t seem to place Your face, it haunts the days I’ve Erased, retraced, my words without meaning Or feeling, stripped down by your Tangled betrayal, your own webbed in strings of vile Look down through an empty isle (Pre Chorus) Deceived, your touch is cold immersed around My reflection, a new deception, distorted images Are filled with hidden disarrays of emotion, this vague commotion You’ve created lies cognizant upon a painful notation. (Chorus) Deprivation, has only seemed to follow me, tracing a path Upon my breath, wasting me, a spark of light has flickered eternally Resembling me, caught in the pain of slain thoughts condemning me Beneath a blinding haze, yours astray, it portrays your gaze Annihilation, has once again adorned your aurora Weaved through the cores of your memoir, your warmth left ajar Surrounding me, another life you’ve left afar, I’m caught in a polestar Of a puzzle of pain aligned only by the hands of your own arraign (Verse two) Your presence, has once again beseeched My thoughts, intervening a race you’ve graced Against my fate, but you smile, to you this is only a game A game delayed, frayed by your own inane Assumptions, that I’ll endure your own preventions To reach my own consumptions of life you’ve only desired Admired, your own expired Pre Chorus Chorus (Solo) My life, once a picture, has dimmed darker Painted over, streaked with lines etched on the surface, forming An en eclipse of pain I can’t abstain, to live, it’s only void of purpose I can’t seem to breathe, my entity, entwined through your detest Has fallen through, it’s only aimless My life, draped across you hands, it belongs to you (Verse three) A phantom, its essence you’ve created Shadows me and I can’t break away From its limitations, a bind that confines A piece of my life from me, but this greed A perpetual need you’ve received To take what you want from me, I can’t evade You’re haunting me to an endless gain, and I’ll Always fade; I’ll be the boundless tear in the page Pre Chorus Chorus x2 ------------------- I'm still liking the old one better. However your comments would be appreciated.