As The Sun Goes Down (Never To Rise Again)

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    Luke

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    As The Sun Goes Down (Never To Rise Again)

    They all call me insane
    At night they force me pills
    Because I gave them all the warning
    That prophecy will be fulfilled
    No more bullshit from the leaders
    No more broadcasts to feed us lies
    The end is near and I can tell this
    From the fear that’s in your eyes

    The night is longing to wake from slumber
    The land starts quaking and the clouds crash thunder
    The white moon reddens to the crimson sky
    But how can this be our time to die?

    The fear is overwhelming
    Humanity will be erased
    As the earth pays back its dues
    For all the life we took away
    And as we watch the sun go down
    Falling from the sky
    Darkness spreads across the land
    Humanity cries

    Magma rises up through the earth
    Lightning strikes across the land
    The seas and oceans turn a blood red
    As ice caps turn into desert sands
    And here I am in this prison
    Watching hell rise up through the ground
    For battles, bloodshed and lies
    Humanity is hellbound

    The tears are dropping because the world will cease
    Population of earth every billion decrease
    Is this god’s wrath for destroying so much life?
    But how can this be our time to die?

    The fear is overwhelming
    Humanity will be erased
    As the earth pays back its dues
    For all the life we took away
    And as we watch the sun go down
    Falling from the sky
    Darkness spreads across the land
    Humanity cries

    This apocalyptic mayhem
    Will oceanise the desert sands
    The earth takes no prisoners
    As metropolis turns into rural land

    For every lie we made
    For every tear we caused
    For every war we started
    For every skull that hit the floor
    For all the lives we took
    For all the suffering we caused
    For all the children’s cries
    For all of humanities flaws

    Drowning
    Drowning
    Drowning
    Drowning into the whirlpool of death

    Drowning
    Drowning
    Drowning
    Trapped in the currents of lies that were said

    The fear is overwhelming
    Humanity will be erased
    As the earth pays back its dues
    For all the life we took away
    And as we watch the sun go down
    Falling from the sky
    Darkness spreads across the land
    Humanity cries

    Darkness falls
    On mankind
    Our only hope
    Is to turn back time
     
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    The Outsider

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    i dont like the name of this poem thats the only thing i dont like about this poem.
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

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    Awsome work hellflame, il oved it, i have to agree, the title doesn't fit the poem as well as it could but the poem is absolutely amazing. Great work.
     
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    niceeee

    good stuff there hellflame B)
     
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    Great work, maybe a tad long though. :)
     
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    Luke

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    A tad long? A tad long? Are you serious? Your last piece of writing was so long that it looked like the american constitution :lol:

    Thanks for all the comments everyone and I've taken the hint that the title sucks :lol:
     

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