Black

Black

Porcelain dreams fall down to the ground
In millions of pieces they shatter aloud
The sun’s reflection blinds every eye
And everything’s black

Logical things don’t make any sense
Inside of this gone astray universe
The planets are spinning just to meet their ends
Fading to black

Happy or sad either way is the same
You look through the sunshine but see only rain
Just mix all the colors and see what you get
Nothing but black

People gather around the happy bride
She holds her bouquet and she’s dressed all in white
But fifty years later she’s old and alone
Wearing black

 

I love it, it's short and bittersweet. One thing; 'the planets are spinning just to meet their ends.

 

Thanks

 

that last part got me...dude...either I've become too sesitive or your poem/song really got me crying... I love it

 

That's really good! Esspecially that last part like Frontman C said.

Just one thing, though. "In millions of pieces they shatter aloud"

*Mali missed a mistake, that almost never happens. Makes me think it could be correct but...

 

Thanks for the comments

The number of spelling errors doesn't surprise me since I typed it in about 20 seconds...