Broken Shadows Verse: Feeling this pain as it won't go away Chorus: Feeling these shadows as they take over me Verse: Fading faster in which something there stands in my way Chorus: Feeling these shadows as they take over me Verse: Looking for which Shadow is the one that is you Chorus: Feeling these Shadows as they take over me Verse: Fighting this feeling that won't go away all caught up as my broken shadow bleeds ....Did I write this in the correct format? Would you guys suggest any changes? Any feedback would be greatly appreciated! Thanks! I'm trying to convert my poem into a song.lol I haven't really done it before so I need advice!!!