Can You Leave?

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by Linja, Apr 10, 2005.

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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    You sit there
    You're watching me
    Are you blind?
    Can't you see?
    Don't want you here
    It always hurts
    I'm all alone, left in
    The dirt

    Why do you try
    So hard to see
    Someone I will never
    Be
    I'm no angel
    Leave no trace
    I'm an angel
    With a dirty face

    Will you leave?
    Can you
    Will you leave?
    How dare you?

    All the pain you've caused me now
    Can you leave? Someway, somehow
    But you stay with me, somehow I know
    I will never lose you, see your back although
    You cause me pain
    I love you so

    Please forgive me
    I won't come back
    I'm too far gone
    I've left no track
    Trapped in my mind
    I've lost the way
    My tears will wind
    Away the day

    All the pain you've caused me now
    Can you leave? Someway, somehow
    But you stay, somehow I know
    I will never lose you, see your back although
    You cause me pain
    I love you so

    Will you leave?
    Can you?
    Will you leave?
    How dare you?
     
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    Il inno di morte

    Il inno di morte A noi si schiude il ciel...

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    It's really good to have new people here at the writers cove :lol:
    this one was really good, have you been writing for a long time? anyway, this one's just awesome, I really liked it. I hope to see more of your stuff soon. keep it up! :D
     
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    Muri

    Muri It never ends.

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    Same here. ;)
    Keep on going! ^_^
     
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    MeLiS_

    MeLiS_ Well-Known Member

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    yea, you both are right, keep it up!!
     
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    fallenangel

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    this was quite good.
    i'd love to see more! :rolleyes:
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

    D_A_V_I_D Pure Pwnage

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    Same here. ;)
    Keep on going! ^_^ [/b][/quote]
    Yer, great stuff. Keep going
     
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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    Thanks. And, no, I haven't been writing for very long.
     
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