Dark Piano

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    Dauen Akaliko

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    Hello everybody, overall what I am looking for is YOUR thoughts and/or suggestions towards my music.

    This is still a work-in-progress piece, and I want to know what you think, what you would add, or have done differently. ANYTHING constructive will be GREATLY appreciated. Thank you in advance for your time.

    http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/445999
     
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    Erica

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    It really is kind of cool. I would take out the evil laughs (kinda cheesy) and add an extra layer of something. Idk, maybe if you know a string instrument that would be rad. Or maybe a soft electronic beat
     
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    Dauen Akaliko

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    Why thank you kind Pidgeon, yeah the laughs were in there through, I guess you'd call it, a copy and paste error - I could take them or leave them. With the extra layer, that was the debate with a couple of my friends. I tried adding some strings and didn't like how it took the focus off the simplicity of the piano, but I'll try a different arrangement anyway. Thanks again for the feedback.
     

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