Deception

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    Luke

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    The years obviously mean nothing to you
    You don't have a clue
    How much blood I would have bled for you
    You don't know what I would do
    To stick by you,
    To be there with you
    But now you just seem to turn away
    No matter what I say
    You just piss away
    12 years of taking the blame
    And helping you off the cocain
    Hell I saved you from a moving train man
    Was it something I said that pissed you off?
    And think I'm not the friend you thought I was?
    Well I'm the same person man I dunno whats up
    Then maybe I'm fed up too
    I aint changed its just you
    You say piss off well I say fuck you too
    Ever since my first day of nursery
    We were friends together
    It seemed to me destiny
    Wanted us to be forever
    Well you say no
    I say piss off
    Who the fuck are you
    You stupid mother fucker punk
    So now I just sit here in my room
    Rock music blaring sonicbooms
    The pictures of us burning causing fumes
    Going into my head like mind control

    This shit fucks around in your head
    This shit turns you into someone else
    This addiction screws up your life
    This drug is called deception




    NOTE:This is just the first verse to my set of lyrics and the chorus,its unfinished but I'd appreiciate some feed back on what you thikn of them so far :)
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

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    Totally amazing. I dont know about others but i liked the blunt outforward feel of the verse and the sort of same in the chorus but that sort of mystery
    Umm what can i say, i really like it myself. Keep writting.
     
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    fallenangel

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    i total agree! this is just funking fab! hurry up and finish it so we can all see the rest!!! :lol:
     
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    Luke

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    :lol: Ok ok I'll hurry

    Thanks for the comments ^_^
     

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