Be sure to check out ver.1 and give your feedback on both versions. k thanks alot everyone. Coming into this world as boy I grew up in the opposite of joy Grasping for direction of something further All I found was vast disappointment The more that I wanted The more I was haunted Shunted by your words of elaborate destruction In my head instead Watch the Saga begin Take in the Chapters of me Don’t hesitate the mistake My head thirsts to bleed Torn and scorn I am taking out the thorns that feed Opening up the book in my head I learned of a death plan She gave me motivation to ascend To rid myself of this adolescent trend (what gives?) The more that I wanted The more I was haunted Shunted by your words of elaborate destruction In my head instead Watch the Saga begin Take in the Chapters of me Don’t hesitate the mistake My head thirsts to bleed Torn and scorn I am taking out the thorns that feed