Did I Drown You?

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by esaul17, Jul 19, 2007.

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    esaul17

    esaul17 antichrist

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    Esoteric overture of unknown precision
    Code of Hammurabi with present connotations
    Blinded for not salvaging the eye of another
    Fail to ask whom was guilty of its destruction
    Tethered to the threat of those saline drops
    Launch a frustrated offensive targeting inertia
    The pinnacle of cumulative irritation
    The wind still hopes to erode the mountain
    Will the temporal dimension permit?
    Ask the chilling soil in voiceless desperation
    You have not an eternity to equalize this pressure

    Oh, was that verse too deep?
    (Did I drown you?)
    Are you now lost?
    (I surround you)
    Don’t be afraid
    (I have found you)
    Try to keep up
    (Enter round two)

    Eclectic parameters fed through systematic objectivity
    Unmatched and detached conviction
    Semantically unsound proclamations
    False binomials and reiterations
    Add a quantum of evidence and the camel lays paralyzed
    You placed on the superfluous weight
    Pawn off the source of this transgression
    It is never too late to practice self deception
    And the early bird strikes again
    Savour every morsel of this slithering delicacy
    I daren’t interrupt this banquet

    You’ve fallen behind
    (I’ll come back for you)
    You’re too slow
    (I’ll react for you)
    Do you accept my hand?
    (It’s too black for you)
    Face the truth
    (It won’t retract for you)

    Egocentric projecting through altered forms
    Embrace my untainted applause for persistence
    Arisen indubitably from your penchant for ignorance
    I implore you to save your prosaic soliloquies
    But you never miss an oppurunity to define futility
    Ubiquitous yet antonymous to omnipotence
    Consciously evading the curse of omniscience
    Unabashedly shackled to this decaying weakness
    Witnesses vanish but testimonies ring perpetual
    Deafening attempts fail to accuse allies for their absence
    Indulge in your providence of self manufactured seclusion
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    omfg you genius. i read the first verse and it took me time to grasp it. and i was like, is this some sort of an equation esaul has come up with, and in a way it was, cause the chorus.. it equated everything to sense. i just smiled. i'm so fucking pleased with this piece. totally am.
     

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