Please comment. (I let esaul17 read it before I posted it so I could get an opinion beforehand. he edited some parts as suggestions to make the refrain flow smoother. I aprecciate it very much and am very happy with this piece) ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- Eat me alive: Could you face yourself after all you've done to me? I bet you could, with your insides dead you've become nothing more than a machine Holes in your exterior can't hold you down, when your interior's already rotted away There’s no point in trying to hurt you, when all you feel is your own decay Just eat me alive! *I can't stand to be separated yet still be attached* I'd rather die *than just be another victim of your catch* It kills me to know you never really cared about the little things I cling to most How you could take every word I spoke and force it right back down my throat Flesh means nothing to you I guess it never has Nothing really possesses any meaning when it slips into your grasp Just eat me alive! *I can't stand to be separated yet still be attached* I'd rather die *than just be another victim of your catch* Now eat me alive! Just eat me alive! Now eat me alive! Just eat me alive! **You’ve already sunk your teeth in so… Just eat me alive** **= edited by esaul17 (Added thanks to esaul for helping me out a lot ever since I really started getting in to writing stuff...this may sound weird but...his work has been an inspiration to me many times (check out his writings when you get the chance to. I bet you'll read something you'll like).)