There's a tree infront of me, its dying branches swaying The autumn leaves upon its arms are slowly decaying I look inside and there i find that same f---ing tree I realize autumn's in my soul and that f---ing tree is me It's bare it's tattered it has no life but it stands so proud And yet its funny how it stands out in a crowd It's ostracized and there I see that lonely f---ing tree No wonder i connect so well that f---ing tree is me Sure people pretend that they care and try to keep it alive But maybe thats not what it wants, maybe it WANTS to die So dont bother trying to help out that worthless f---ing tree Because you never f---ng tried to help out me No you never ever f---ing TRIED to help out lonely me So when I die bury me under that f---ng tree That way you can forget the both of us, that f---ing tree and me
Pretty cool. I'm not a fan of profanity in music, but I think you used it well, and not as just a cheap way to hide your emotions. I like the idea (well not of it happening but you know what I mean). Nice overall package. 8/10