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   esaul17 antichrist

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   esaul17, Nov 19, 2005
   
   
   
   
   

   http://esaul17.sitesled.com/Fade Me Down.htm
   
   Tell me what you think.

    
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   Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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   Arhaz, Nov 19, 2005
   
   
   
   
   

   a bit cliche, nice setting for the poem and a good job in the use of words.

    
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   esaul17 antichrist

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   esaul17, Nov 24, 2005
   
   
   
   
   

   Thanks. Anyone else?

    
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   Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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   Linja, Nov 24, 2005
   
   
   
   
   

   I like this, you rhyme really well.

    

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