I've fallen off the face of the earth Mother said The phone lines are cut And the TV's dead I have nothing to do Nowhere to go Stuck in a hole with no one here instead Waiting for my calling Waiting for the next sign that you will come to save the day Sitting here for hours on end Figures what they said This is the way To grandma's house. Here I go again Sitting in Nowhereville with 3 dollars And a pocket full of dreams I'm suffocating here...alone again
aww! That's good. It really has a lot of imagery in it. You can just about invision you sitting on the computer. hehe, jk. I like it though. It's short and you get a good sense of the emotion and images. hehe, good self expression. hey...where is this Nowhereville? I think I should come for a visit!
For some reason I thought of the Wizard Of Oz when I read this. I agree with Holiday, it creates a lot of imagery. I think it's great.