falling

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    fallenangel

    fallenangel Well-Known Member

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    Falling

    Lying here on this rubble
    As the light streams in though that window
    A small beam of light barely touches me
    As I lay in this darkness

    I can not fall any further
    Cause I have already fallen
    My heavy black wings cover me
    As I lie here broken
    For you have knocked me down

    Will some one breath life back into my dead soul?
    Only then I shall rise again
    No longer bitter and twisted
    But new and forgiving

    ok, i know this is not that good but i haven't been able to write that much... :wth:
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    i love the second stanza....something fantastic about it.... ^_^
     

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