Please tell me what you think / how to improve / and so on... ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Faux: You touch the surface and wish you were deeper You can taste the tension as your finger cusps eat her When you look up her skirt is lifted so high She holds your hand tightly as her screaming reaches the sky Her legs are opened wide and from within comes a demon Her lips are agitated and it's harder to read them She wants Her child, a faux Reborn unto him, so slow She wants the burden, fullblown Reborn unto him, so slow Raged, it creeps within waiting, patiently to arrive Unaware of the pain inflicted to her as it thrives Bursting into a world unknown, it gets colder than it expected Barely taking first breaths and it's already been rejected. She wants Her child, a faux Reborn unto him, so slow She wants the burden, fullblown Reborn unto him, so slow