Happy Valentine's Day A sheet of snow blankets the world we see A cold exterior covers where I want to be Those icy walls surround your heart I’ll scream and cry but they won’t part They freeze the tears streaming down my face Bind me to this painful place Outside your heart, not in your mind But still close enough to be confined When in your eyes I question my worth And when you’re gone I regret my birth It hurts to know you’ll never say “Have a Happy Valentine’s Day” Now we near the middle of February Time makes my heart grow wary My voice can’t make it through the rough Insecurities scream I’m not enough Every word you say sounds so cold The sight of your face makes my hand fold Shrink inside myself and force a smile A moment of happiness, but worth my while And as winter’s domain reaches its end I close my eyes and pretend That the icy walls will melt away And you’ll wish me a Happy Valentine’s Day
i've seen better from you, but this was great. could beat me well. it flowed really well, but your vocabulary has been better. a sweeet piece, none the less.
Thanks again. And I honestly think you've written far better poems than any of mine. I can't hold my own against your vocabulary.