Have you been hiding?

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    Seinfeld

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    I'd really apreciate feedback on this one...if you could take the time to post a comment of what you liked and what could / should be improved I'd be very grateful ^_^
    (thank you for reading it in advance)


    Have you been hiding?:

    (Promise) If I fall apart
    You'll be there with open arms?
    (Promise) If I fall apart
    Your hands will shield my heart?


    It's been a while since I've seen your face
    (Have you been hiding from this place?)
    Digging through letters and memories of better times
    (Have you been hiding inbetween the lines?)
    Hoping to get a closer look at what's behind your mask
    (Have you been trying to slip from my grasp?)
    But again I find your shield of lies has been screwed tight
    (Have you been trying to keep out of sight?)

    When I fall apart
    Will you be there with open arms?
    When I fall apart
    Will I feel your hands around my heart?

    Now I want to meet face to face, no masks inbetween
    (Have you been hiding?)
    I want to meet the coward behind what I've seen
    (Have you been hiding?)
    I know it won't comfort me to see your face again
    (Have you been hiding?)
    But I want to see who's claiming to be the person I knew back then
    (Why have you been hiding?)

    Now I'm falling apart
    Are you waiting to keep me from harm?
    Now I'm falling apart
    Are you going to shield my bleeding heart?

    It drives me insane to know what I can't believe
    (HIDE!)
    It pains me so when all along, I've been deceived
    (WHY!?)
    Your horrid mask reflects what you've become
    (LIE!)
    No need to see your face, when I see what you've done
    (WHY!?)

    (*Screaming*)
     
    Last edited: Apr 8, 2007

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