I was standing on a hill in Michigan

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by TRANSLYDE, Dec 10, 2009.

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    TRANSLYDE

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    TRANSLYDE, Dec 10, 2009



    I'm not such a big fan of it, but apparently my university's writing magazine was (I sent three submissions to them last month, and this is the one that got in):

     
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    El Muerto

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    El Muerto, Dec 28, 2009



    Not bad.. but seems kind incomplete. Take it and work a little more on it, it's got potential.
     

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