But I need a hook, and I want to know what you think about what's already written. Thank You I'm glowing bright like a glow stick in the deepest darkness of the pain Rain dropping harder than Thors hammer on my brain Everything still seems the same Put Ground Zero beneath the waves I've tried so hard to make it this far, but in the end it all falls apart Collapsing to the floor/ breaking like a pickle jar My jaw always seems to be so far away from my brain Laying down on the floor, drained only to feel ashamed I woke up today laying the same way I always do with you/with my life starting the same way it could do with you All the phrases that speak inside my mind begins to cry I try to put the hidden aside, but then my brain begins to fry I try secretly hide them far away just to buy my life some time But the same people who created me, makes all the pain collide Making it just so hard to look back on, I try to flee the scene at last If only I could look forward/Towards what the future has Creating inside of me only what my eyes can see I’m Caught in the struggle of watching you juggle your thoughts of me Thrown around I'm tangled in the cords you found Torn and struggling to break free of the broken thorns If you strike me down again, I might bleed out of things to say Hurting me so much within, the pain begins stay to unleash again