Lost In Its Own Desire

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    Will

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    Lost In Its Own Desire

    The thing that I once cherished has been shattered
    And I just can’t take this anymore
    It’s as though our love had never even mattered
    I just wanna’ have what we had before
    The thing that I once cherished has been shattered
    And I just can’t take this anymore
    It’s as though our love had never even mattered
    I just wanna’ have what we had before

    I can still remember the nights that we used to share
    And when I would hold you when you were so scared
    I remember the nights that we’d spend at the beach
    And out toward the stars we would extend our reach
    While wishing upon the countless shooting stars above
    And my wishes were always just to secure our love
    I thought that nothing in the world could break us apart
    Until that one faithful day when everything would start
    It was when the bickering finally turned into screaming
    And now I can’t be sure just what it is that I’m feeling
    I was hoping that I’d be able to turn everything around
    But our love was destined to fail and crash to the ground
    I remember the silent wishes we made upon the stars
    It turns out that the wishes were left upon my heart
    And the fun that we all used to have on all those days
    Had turned out to be nothing in some sick, twisted way
    Now it doesn’t really matter how the time ticks by
    Because I can still remember your cold, silent goodbye

    The thing that I once cherished has been shattered
    And I just can’t take this anymore
    It’s as though our love had never even mattered
    I just wanna’ have what we had before
    The thing that I once cherished has been shattered
    And I just can’t take this anymore
    It’s as though our love had never even mattered
    I just wanna’ have what we had before

    Our love used to burn strong like a wildfire
    But it was slowly lost in its own desire
    And it was in those last days of Autumn
    But none of this can ever be forgotten
    As the tears slowly fell when it ended
    It was like our love in time was suspended
    I still hold onto the picture of your face
    In my heart you’ll always have you place

    The thing that I once cherished has been shattered
    And I just can’t take this anymore
    It’s as though our love had never even mattered
    I just wanna’ have what we had before
    The thing that I once cherished has been shattered
    And I just can’t take this anymore
    It’s as though our love had never even mattered
    I just wanna’ have what we had before

    The thing that I once cherished has been shattered
    And I just can’t take this anymore
    It’s as though our love had never even mattered
    I just wanna’ have what we had before
    The thing that I once cherished has been shattered
    And I just can’t take this anymore
    It’s as though our love had never even mattered
    I just wanna’ have what we had before

    Why does life have to be this way?
    Why can’t we just say what we need to say?
    Why does life have to be this way?
    Why can’t we just say what we need to say?
    Why does life have to be this way?
    Why does life have to be this way?
    Why does life have to be this way?
    From this world I just want to slip away

    I don’t understand this world that we are living in
    People give you things so they can take them back again
    I don’t wanna’ be part of history
    I just want my life to be the way that it should be
    Every now and then, I find a way to slip away
    ‘Cause every now and then, there’s only so much I can take
    If I find a way
    I will leave today

    The thing that I once cherished has been shattered
    And I just can’t take this anymore
    It’s as though our love had never even mattered
    I just wanna’ have what we had before
    The thing that I once cherished has been shattered
    And I just can’t take this anymore
    It’s as though our love had never even mattered
    I just wanna’ have what we had before

    Why does life have to be this way?
    Every now and then, I find a way to slip away
    Why can’t we just say what we need to say?
    ‘Cause every now and then, there’s only so much I can take
    From this world I just want to slip away
    If I find a way
    I will leave today

    The thing that I once cherished has been shattered
    And I just can’t take this anymore
    It’s as though our love had never even mattered
    I just wanna’ have what we had before
    The thing that I once cherished has been shattered
    And I just can’t take this anymore
    It’s as though our love had never even mattered
    I just wanna’ have what we had before

    Note: I sampled a portion of Dry Cell's "Slip Away." That portion of lyrics have been copyrighted by Dry Cell. I assume no ownership of those lyrics at all. Please read and respond.
     
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    Wow, as usual, amazing work :D . This is really deep, and writing everything in rhymes is hard... You are really talented, keep on writing!
     
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    Holy sh*t dude! Thats it, move your ass here were making a band :lol:
     
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    Another great piece of work, Will. ;) :)
     
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    Methybrea

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    What EastCoast said......

    Are you in a band, Will?
     
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    Thanks a lot for the comments, guys. All your comments push me to keep writing more and push my talents.

    And, for the record, I don't have a band, but I hope to be in one sometime in the future. I plan on learning guitar next summer, hopefully, and I want to take vocal lessons. :)
     
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    That song is awesome :eek:





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    J/K :shifty:
     
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    :eek: its amazin
     
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    Usually when someone takes parts of another song and puts it in theres, it ends up being crap. But in your case. Wow ! That song is amazing. You should get a band started rigth away. Your totally ready with lyrics like those.
     

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