I really don't know if this is good or not.. but I had some inspiration, and I felt I needed to write it. Hope it flows well, it may be a little shabby.. ----- so much for loving you the taste of blood on your skin makes me salivate as the sound of your voice makes me scream so much for needing you time will end as the blood drops at our fate and my nightmare will end as a dream crimson colors, jagged edges scraped across my skin love is like a melody but needing is a sin so much for my ordinary life it's gone away in the mist all I have is this knife hidden within my fist so much for loving so much for hating so much for needing your heart in my hand blood tearing out of the wounds and jumping onto your skin attacking you for dear life and contrasting your sins
hey nice, i felt the first few lines didn't flow to well but after that it all went nicely, great job, i like your style of writting. Great Work.
I love it! It's great!!! I like it, and I think the flow was good, too. I really like your style, please write more.