Wow, I haven't written in ages. I've missed writing so much.. I suppose this one's okay. It may be a little shabby but it's the best I can do. Please comment. ------ Your silence tells me secrets that no one else can hear Murmering sweet nothings, plaguing my gentle ears Your voice is like a sweet caress tingling over my skin Your hands on me and your breathe on my face, My love for you a sin. My heart drenched in your soul and eyes Two green orbs hiding lies All of what i'm doing defies, What I'm really supposed to be doing.. I should be tearing you out of my heart and leaving the blood to rot on the floor I drop my tears of saddness and start off where I was before.. There's nothing you can do to stop me.. For what else I have in store
Wow, I realllly love that line Anya its so beautiful, You should write more you seem very talented. I cant really point out anything thats wrong with it 9/10..I like it alot.
Wow, I realllly love that line Anya its so beautiful, You should write more you seem very talented. I cant really point out anything thats wrong with it 9/10..I like it alot. [/b][/quote] You think so? I really hope so, I love to write. I just never seem to really find the time to do it. I have alot of other poems, but they're all allready posted, and they're old too. If you liked that just go in some of the older threads from a while ago, and I have more there. Thankyou though.
Yeah,I like it alot too. It's amazing. I want to write like that too. Very good. uh. Should I rate? 10/10.
i really like this bit but this bit is by far the best! very good use of imagery! i think you should try to write more cause ur obviously good at it.