My Antithesis

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    Subliminal

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    You are the beginning of my end
    An enemy against which I cannot defend
    You’re the darkness snuffing out my light
    I realize that it can never be alright
    And so I tried to hide inside somewhere
    The heart of me sendin’ along a silent prayer

    Somehow you heard it, somehow you found me
    Spittin’ acid at me while I try to flee
    But how can I run, where can I hide
    When you’re trying to kill me from the inside
    Your words, your actions, corrupting my mind
    Like the power in my heart has been misaligned
    Turning against me, keeping me confined

    You attack me everyday with everything that you’ve got
    Leaving a black spot on my chest with every shot
    The darkness spreads, encasing me in black
    No shield can protect me from your deadly attack
    Your sonic vibes, rockin’ my brain
    Entering my domain, the emotional plane

    You come at me again, weapons at the ready
    This time I’m not alone, my trigger finger’s steady
    You’ve brought me here again, made me bleed
    You’ll push me back no longer, I will not concede
    This time you’re leaving, this time you lose
    I’ve had enough of your sadistic abuse
    Taking advantage of my nature, only defense
    Now for once, you’re screwed, I’m on the offense

    What, now you run away? For once you don’t want to play?
    You can’t run for me, I’ve learned all too well
    I’ve learned from the best, yourself, here’s a final farewell
    Smell the smoke as it rises from the barrel of my gun
    My finger pulled the trigger, deed is done, final battle begun

    You can’t win this time, I know you all too well
    Learned every move you’d make, I’ll send you straight to hell
    I won’t resist for anyone’s sake, I’ll make you pay for this last mistake
    You won’t beat me this time, your pain relieves mine
    I’ll send you through a shattered world, one of your own design

    But back from the grave, you won’t let me be
    My Antithesis, you’re haunting me
     
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    esaul17

    esaul17 antichrist

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    I like it. One thing I do not quite understand. Did you physically shoot him or just verbally? If you did so lyrically it would seem the battle is over, not begun.

    Edit, sorry. I just rmembered the ending. Nevermind my post.

    Good job though.
     
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    Burningsoul

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    B) nice, likin the anger and thirst for revenge, against a spirit, or person, or......... ok im confused ;)
     

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