My first poem i post on this site!!

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    duongtran

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    It's not the best poem out there but it came from my heart and I would like to share it with you guys!

    TITLE: What To Do

    I can't handle the idea of you
    but yet you are the only real thing I ever had
    you never gave up on me and I thank you for that
    your kindness could make the world happy
    your mercy would light up the world
    the fact that you're still my friend amazes me
    because I did nothing to save you
    there once was a time when sadness filled your heart
    and all you needed was comfort from a friend
    but everyone you knew shoved you away without a thought
    and the sadness inside your heart found a friend in loneliness
    all I did was watch as you fell apart
    I don't deserve you
    but what can I do when I love you so much
    I still remember how you forgave everyone for their betrayal
    but even as I stood before you saying I'm sorry, forgive me
    I couldn't help but hate myself
    A part of me wanted you to reject my apology
    I wanted to earn your forgiveness the right way
    but every time I try to help you i end up in the way
    so what can I do besides run away from you
    You're better off without me
    I can admit that openly but you won't let me
    I'm sorry I can't be a better person for you
    I'm sorry for being so useless to you
    most of all I'm sorry you have to put up with me
    teach me how to be a better person

    Feedback is nice maybe i can fix it!!!
     

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