first of all, its not really done, my mom talked to my while i was writing it, and it got me out of the "groove" *shakes fist in direction of mother* well here it is (i think its crap..... but i dunno, no one has read it yet, so they havent critised yet...) lost inside, and no one can find me all alone, trapped from the beginning the shock has percieved yet none in affect crying for my life but only dead hear me wishing for it to cease wishing for a break hurt inside i am the dead, unhealing the rocky path and winding streets was chosen for me i'm not ready striving for feat but tumble, tumble in my deceat yelling for peace none come for my release hurt inside i am the dead, unhealing so what do you guys think??????? if only i wasnt distracted from my mom, i could have done much better!