Listen to these silent whispers as my soul bleeds you can feel me wither Into the darkness, I’m losing control Oblivious to the fact that I wont let go In the center of this room full of emptiness The silence grows from the endless nothingness I scribble down my last words before I’m fallen It can’t be stopped, this is my calling My instincts are always telling me otherwise Please answer my pleas, I’ve lost all my pride too much to list of what I’ve sacrificed Blinded by a menacing confusion in my mind Nobody ever looks at me the same, I guess I’m not your kind please somebody up there answer me before I hide Secluded away from this world filled with too much lies In these last seconds I will, listen to the voices that should be heard Even if their words should sound like a curse Random thoughts now floating above me I’m so blinded now, so just let me bleed This is it now, my eternal words will endure I mumble my last words as they become a constant slur Forever now, I’ll be the haunting voice in the back of your head Realize the guilt, you are within the skin of which you cannot shed these will be the last words that I spit Here it comes the final slit
This one is much better than the other one i read, i really liked this, it flowed great and no forced rhyming, well actualy any hardly rhyming at all. It was great. Keep it up.