heres anothing short one, not my best work but never mind, can't all be great! nice always finishes last i always tryed to be good the way i was brought up to be always nice, thinking of everyone else but who the hell ever thought about me? nice always finshes last guess thats just the way it's ment to be nice always finshes last but why the fuck does that always mean me what was it, was it because i was bad at being good cause the bad always got the love the good just stood at the side waiting patiently but the love never came nice always finishes last guess thats the way it's ment to be nice always finishes last but why the fuck does that always mean me?
LOL, i like it cause i can relate to it, but now u extinguished my hope . Well i can sit here and hope that they won't. Ignorence is bliss.
so sorry, but i do belive that nice people can make it in the end, we just sometimes need to try harder. i have faith that at the end of the day, good will be remembered over bad. it's just that faith of mine has been tested alittle too much lately.
Totally agreed. The bad guy is the one always remebered. And the good guy will be remembered for the bad things he's done, it's just not fair. But we shall both hope that the nice guy will finish last. we will be like the turtle. Slow but we shall win when it comes to the finishing line.
I really like it. I think it's true, and we do need to try harder. I really like this one...It's one of my favorites. -stares in adoration-
That is so true...personal experience i always used to be good nice and all that ... but i was actually getting stepped all over!! And I have changed. And you should see you earn much more respect So basically i love this one. I think its one of your best
Well though the poem is good,I didnt understand as to what you are talking about when you are saying nice finishes always last,looks like you are talking about the nice people finishing last(though not sure),but nevertheless the poem overall is good,but definetly not your best.