Piece of My Mind

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    a life in ashes

    a life in ashes mercury summer

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    Piece of My Mind

    So I feel dead, dead where I stand,
    Screaming at me blood on your hand,
    Stains on the blade fire in your heart,
    Build me up so you can tear me apart,

    I don't understand, understand your game,
    Broken down man kinda likes this pain,
    Feeling cold inside prepare to break,
    No control after all it's come too late,

    Hopeless,
    Crying,
    Lifeless,
    Dying,

    Spit it out, out for all to see,
    Do you still want to hate me,
    I don't know which one is true,
    You don't know which part of me is you,

    Hated,
    Fallen,
    Sedated,
    Crawling,

    Everthing we did was never going to last,
    All the pieces must glide into the past,
    A piece of my mind.


    thoughts please...
     
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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    I love this. Brilliant.
     
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    heshboy

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    Very nice, I read it twice. 4*/5
     

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