Razor

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by Debus, Nov 1, 2003.

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    Debus

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    I can't deal with you anymore
    You've driven me over the edge
    Keep your opinion of me to yourself
    I don't need more pain in my life

    You've scarred me mentaly
    I hope you realise what you have done
    The tears i have cried burn me
    Why does it hurt so much?

    Lately i can't hold in my anger
    The razor has become my best friend since you came along
    It's all your fault i'm like this
    I blame you for everything


    This is how i feel right now :'(. Its only a little poem but hey. Any opinions? What do you think? This is my first time to write in here by the way so it is probly not that good :mellow:
     
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    Andrea

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    I think it's very good. I can relate to it so I know how you feel. Cheer up though. :)
     
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    Debus

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    Thanks :) . I literally JUST wrote it off the top of my head. I can't cheer up at the moment tho sorry
     

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