Remember Me Remember me The silent whisper through The misty air A child was born Somebody died out there I heard their words they made me feel so Made me feel outshined and scared The ray of light Breaking through the fog I saw a shadow going down the road It could be a train It could be the Sun In the end of my tunnel I am standing alone It’s all I ask for, all I want All demands in just two words And when everyone forsake Would you be there for my sake It’s all I ask for, all I want All demands in just two words With the dawn of brand new day Will you still remember me Remember me The silhouette In the darken night Yesterday somebody died I heard their thoughts they made me feel Like I was never really there The memories Of the passing life Buried in the sands of time Yesterday somebody died Now I see that it was me
At the start is seemed very everywhere and i'm like WTF . But it all tied in very nicely at the end, i really liked it because i couldn't tell what was comming, it made it more enjoyable to read. Great work. B)
IT'S BEAUTIFUL!!... i can't describe what i imagined, but i just have to close my eyes and your poem takes me away.... it's so good! i hate you...i hate all talented people!............