Revenge Is Sweeter Than A Twenty Second Kiss pt.2

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    Luke

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    NOTE: This song continues right where part 1 left off (See Revenge is better than a twenty second kiss to see), this tune is also very soft and the main tune has much piano in it.

    Revenge is colder
    Revenge is colder
    Revenge...

    Sew up a broken heart
    Torn in the shadows, ripped apart
    No sense of moral right
    Colder than the coldest night
    No one cared for you like I did
    Not anything near what I had to give
    Every day with you was a dream
    But oh the fool I must have been
    I wont let you walk away
    Without consequences to face
    A year of dreams is worth fuck all
    But we'll see who'll be standing tall

    Learn your lesson
    Punching what I thought was a friend
    And my dearist will witness
    The begining of the end

    This is my revenge
    For you've done to me
    A blackened shadow
    Of what you meant to me
    Revenge is sweeter
    Than anything you gave
    As friendship and my love
    Fades into grey

    February 14th, valentines day
    In a hospital where you lay
    I sat next to you all the time
    Praying to god that you wouldn't die
    But now I pray for something else
    Hoping you'll both go to hell
    I'm a magnet for betrayal
    Everything I do I seem to fail
    Why must life screw me around
    This first love I thought I had found
    Until a friend took it away
    Well I wont let you walk away

    Learn your lesson
    Punching what I thought was a friend
    And my dearist will witness
    The begining of the end

    This is my revenge
    For you've done to me
    A blackened shadow
    Of what you meant to me
    Revenge is sweeter
    Than anything you gave
    As friendship and my love
    Fades into grey

    Fading away
    Memories turn to ashes
    Revenge ignites my soul
    A flame That I can't control

    Stay away from me
    Get the fuck away from me

    This is my revenge
    For you've done to me
    A blackened shadow
    Of what you meant to me
    Revenge is sweeter
    Than anything you gave
    As friendship and my love
    Fades into grey

    Revenge is a dish best served cold
    But still not colder than betrayal
     
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    Arhaz

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    Awesome job, mate. Worth an awesome applaud. ;)

    *Applause*
     
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    Friskey™

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    NOICE! :lol:
     
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    Linja

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    Goooood. ^_^
     
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    Luke

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    Would you all say its better than part one or is part one better?
     
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    a life in ashes

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    If I could write as well as you i'd die a happy man...
    this is great.
     
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    Luke

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    Thanks! :lol: :)
     
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    Awesome work :D



    But to be honest, I prefer part one :chemist:
     
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    Luke

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    Cheers Dave B)


    If anyone else could please tell me which one you prefer that would be cool :)
     
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    Andrea

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    There, I commented. :p




    ...lol. Yeah, I really like this one. I love your writing technique. Keep it up. :)
     
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    Luke

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    This is the happiest day of my life (w00t)


    Joking...I'm not that sad :lol:

    Thanks for the comment :D
     

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