Six feet between you and me. I know that I make a mistake every time I look at the midnight sky, Every glitter every sparkle of every star reminds me of your eyes, And the way I pointlessly stared on at them, into them, The stars stare back at me now, the venom falling from, till the end. Love is poison and I devour it with a complete and enchained heart, Love is the cause I spend my endless nights being torn apart, Beneath the acidifying blankness of tonight, love shall prevail, And I shall follow that blazing heart line; I shall walk the path you had trailed. I shall cross every mile, drunken in the helpless search to find you, I’ll save my breath, my blood, within a bottle and gift everything noble and true, On finding you, in the heavens or the earth, I’ll snatch my soul right out, Tear it and share it with you and our love shall be eternal with no doubt. I’m on the quest to find my love, in a form I detest but love, beneath six feet of earth, On finding this lost ruby cluster, deep noble and fulfilling love shall face rebirth. And we shall lie once more to the ages and times as they farewell goodbye, I’m counting on your pearl drops, I want to feel the life, please come alive and cry. Cry because I swallowed the poison and I’m intoxicated by a half life, The other half I blow into you, as I split my soul with a gifted knife. Joining you, beneath six feet of where we once lay hot and living, I’m cold, but right beside you now, pardon me, this is all I can be giving. reviews needed. i had a terrible writer's block. i tried my best to stay focussed.
This is really good, lol, I'm going through an 'I-Can't-Pay-Attention-So-I-Don't-Really-Concentrate-On-What's-In-Front-Of-Me' mood right now, so I won't be able to ... criticise or anything like that. Not that there's anything to be criticised, I really like this, it's a great piece. Cheers