Something Inside of Me

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    a life in ashes

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    Something Inside of Me

    Come one and all to see the bitter man,
    Talking to himself again,
    I think you'll see, in the winds that sweep our time,
    That bitter man is me,

    The atmosphere is lethal,
    Feel it growing in you,
    I'm drowned with hollow laughter,

    Why,

    Leave the phone ringing off the hook again,
    Her silence is so perfect,
    The crimson rope, I cut it round my wrist,
    But I could do so much better,

    The poison lips are icy,
    Something I'd forgotten,
    Perhaps something else will save me,

    Will you breathe into me (breathe into me),
    Will you stop my dreaming (of those lies),
    Something inside of me,

    If being numb is not the way,
    Why don't you understand,
    Provide me with the answers,
    We all hit the floor,

    Alive but only breathing,
    It's all just one cliche,
    Angels and the fallen,
    Decide which one I am,

    Will you breathe into me (breathe into me),
    Will you stop my dreaming (darkened eyes will see),
    Something inside of me,

    Will you breathe into me (breathe into me),
    Will you stop my dreaming (darkened eyes will see),
    Something inside of me.


    ...thoughts please...
     
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    JJ

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    thats my favourite part right there

    i like it a lot - very well done
     
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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    I don't like this as much as your other work, but it's still pretty good.
     
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    natalie_16_2k5

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    I like it alot
     

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