Sonnet

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by Debus, Dec 21, 2004.

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    Debus

    Debus Morbid Fascination LPA Addict

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    I wrote this in English today. We were supposed to be writing about 10 things we hated about someone but we love them really in sonnet form and it kind of turned into someting completely different. Read away people. Comments would be very welcome


    Your ice cold words shoot right through me
    Your lack of conversation makes me weak
    You prey on my mind, you really need to see
    How much you make me scream and weep
    I always seem to be your cosmic joke
    You've never seen how much you care
    Floating in my mind just like smoke
    And all my dreams you never seem to share
    I wish you were mine, my somoene divine
    I stare at you in deepest lust
    You've lead me on from time to time
    Why is there such a lack of trust
    Even with all this in my mind
    I know that really you are mine
     
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    Adam

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    It's a little short, but I like it a lot, keep up the good work Debs :thumbsup:
     

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